The only one who knew my night

PLEASE NOTE:

I am not looking for critique on the story of the comic, simply the quality of the art, I am no writer and I do not intend to be. Any criticism you can provide on the matter of art quality would be greatly appreciated.

Also, please refrain from posting comments like "AH FEELS" or whatever, I don't have a response to it, it evokes no emotions from me, it benefits no one, it is a waste of both of our time and it floods my inbox.

I will throw in a free requests for worthy critiques that I feel helped me.